Thursday, November 4, 2010
The revision
The revision of my research essay did not turn out to be very bad. The main thing I had to do was change my thesis and fix some of the paragraphs to fit it. The structure of the essay was already there. Most of the time I only needed to add a sentence to further explain my points, or differentiate what I had to say from wht the blogger had to say. This type of essay is easier than creative writing to me and I can crack down and finish it faily quick once I structure the introduction paragraph. Following a blog was new to me at the beginning of this project, but now that I know how interesting it is to get different points of views on my favorite subjects, I will continue to follow blogs in the future. Overall I may not be the biggest writing fan, but I felt that my essay fit the identity of the blogger perfectly.
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Its good to see that you seemed to have taken an interest in following blogs so fast Josh, cuz we really didn't follow them this long. From what I remember of your presentation, you definitely had gotten your identity idea down pretty good, and all I can really say is just keep up the good work man.
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