Thursday, October 21, 2010
Time for an upgrade
Essays are a challenge to all who write. Every essay takes time to get in perfect condition. My research essay on the NFC north blog needs some revising. After the writing conferences I found that a better thesis was tucked away in the middle of the paper. Instead of focusing on random quotes from my blog, I need to center my attention towards one source if identity. That source would be the unpredictability and suspense that comes with every NFL matchup. Another issue I intend to fix is shorten the quotes I positioned in the essay. They are too long for a paper of this length, and I again need to focus on one source of identity instead of many. Time to upgrade my research and improve my thesis to obtain an excellent finished product.
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Looks like you're ahead of me as far as quotes and evidence! But its great to see that you are focusing on a specific label to give your identity, I find that it gives me a clear direction of where I want to take my paper. I totally agree that essays are tough, I personally prefer creative writing, but that's college for ya.
ReplyDeleteIt seems like you have a good idea of where you have to go from here. It is good thing that you know what specifically you need to change.
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